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The Story about Six Rusty
Nails
I have more work to do before I am finished with my story about
Six Rusty Nails.
There were many things I had not considered. When we write, we get
engrossed in our own world and it's hard to break up and discard what we believe is imperative
for the story to function.
After having had my manuscript professionally
assessed, I have discovered that if I am brave enought to slash away some parts, it
may become a better story.
So, back to the computer to use the cutting implement and then
maybe add a few more exciting elements, if I can just get the right inspiration.

This is Lena Nilsson and this is her story -
Six Rusty Nails.

When we write stories, we use our
thinking quite a lot. We need an idea to start with.
Something we will be able to communicate to children.
First lines are important, so are interesting
characters. We have to remember viewpoints and we have to not only
come up with believable story lines, but also with
some excellent plotting to make it all exciting.
The story needs to
move forward, not backwards, even if we have to go back in time. Heroes may
be likeable, but not every day. We cannot forget our villains, the
baddies, but baddies can also be goodies, however, not all the time. If we are generous, we
add in more than one villain, even if we can make do with a single one without getting into
strife.
Last, but not least, we
need acceptable endings and like the real authors say - do not finish with
this:
"Can you
imagine? It was all a dream."
Write, write every day. It doesn't matter what we write as long as
we write. Read, read every day. It doesn't matter what we read as long as we read.

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Would you like to come with Benjamin Starling to
another world? Do you have what it takes? The right map, a compass and the necessary bits
and pieces?
The world you're going to is unbelievable, but
exciting with its dusky, swampy and much too strange terrain. Beware because
it's also dangerous with magical traps.
If you want to follow Ben there, you have
to realise he was born a worrier. Yes, he worries
constantly about most things and it could be contagious. With his parents gone and a
mean and jealous brother, it's not always fun. As a matter of fact, he hates it. However,
circumstances force him to grow up fast.
If you have Ben as company into this world,
don't be scared when something really bad happens. You may be left on your own to fend
for yourself. Why? Because Ben happens to disappear. He
ends up in a weird place downunder and
you - you will be left to your own devices. Try to work yourself out of that
situation if you can, but don't fall into any trap in the process! Ben is clever
enough to make it. You can too!
During his time in this baffling place, he finds
out from an old and scraggly man that he must find the most important
keystone before the ultimate rescue attempt can take place. It's a race against time. Others too
are after the famous keystone, which was lost on top. Can the rescue succeed? Will it be a
great escape?
Who
are the evil ones chasing them? Will all make
it back before they're caught?

This was only
some brief info without getting into too many details. More will
follow.

I think I am a kid at heart and that's why I love
to write for children.
I am waiting to grow up. I have been waiting so long that my hair
has turned grey and new wrinkles appear every day.
I'm no angel, but I want to believe I have a kind
heart. It helps to have the most beautiful grandchildren too. They are all the sweetest
angels. At least when they want to be.

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